Wednesday, 19 March 2014

Athletics Poem

The H.N.I Athletics Sounds 

Children cheering for their house 
Bang as the gun blows 
Thumping as the children sprint 
Loud shot puts hitting the ground

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  1. Anonymous21 March 2014 at 14:01

    Nice poem. I think maybe you should of put a bit more in

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  2. Mia's Nana23 March 2014 at 20:15

    Lovely poem Mia. Lots of interesting ideas. Great way to do all your schoolwork - you are so lucky!

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  3. Unknown25 March 2014 at 20:56

    An interesting poem Mia. It reminds me of athletic sports day when I was a school girl at intermediate - hard ground, dry grass, hot sun beating down, kids yelling encouragement to their friends. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems.
    Good Job Mia.

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